Broken Mirrors Discussion

Okay, Olga wants to know when she should pick Ronnie up, and whether Ronnie prefers girl-Olga or boy-Olga. Or whether she should just "surprise" Ronnie.

Oh, and I just thought of why it might be called "the Program". Because somebody was too fond of telling paranormals that they had to "get with the program... or else."

I want to write i just havent been able to sit and do so. Jase has a project with a friend and has been hogging the computer. The tablet is great, but not really for word proccessing.

Yes I have deleted both the original Gemini thread and the newer broken mirrors thread. I will be recreating Broken Mirrors I just need to get it all pulled back together. I am (in dribs and drabs) writing on it. I ****Might**** be done with it before Andi graduates, but i doubt it at this point.

Ok I have reposted the introduction and the Prologue. I may re number the chapters I have and break Chapter one where i have it, basically it gets through Ronnie's first day at SCRT. My plan was to have various scenes of her getting to know the team and probie hazing, etc. Then pick up the story when Ronnie's been there for 3 months and the next victim is found.

Ideas on the breaks or should I lump the "getting to know you" all together in one chapter.

If you are still reading I posted Chapter 1 so no Broken Mirrors is now Reality Nexus: Broken Mirrors and has An intro, a prologue and chapter 1 up

Caught up on yours now. You know what comes next:

"Write more!"

I like your take on empaths. One bit that could use some attention IMO:

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The stuff the original CSIs is good, but dealing with our kind we can do a certain amount of extra testing things that look like contamination can just be magic or certain DNA markers normally associated with harmless mutation are really indicators of someone’s paranormal heritage.

Attention in what way? Grammatically, expand on the idea?thanks for the kudos. I keep hoping timewill permit me to "write more".

Grammatical. (The idea's fine.) I'd either throw some punctuation in the middle, or break it up into two sentences. Probably just after "testing."

I intended to. I think it got accidentally "fixed" as I was writing.

OK, should I post The scenes as I finish them or should I wait until I finish a chapter and post it complete? I will be posting the story in order, so what I have that's later in the story won't appear until I actually get there. Suggestions?

I say publish it however you want us to read it, but a finished chapter keeps us from re-reading the same scene over and over again.

I have decided that I will post as I finish each scene, but, unlike Sr Steven, each scene will not be a chapter. I will make a heading for each new chapter that way there isn't such a long wait between posts for those that want to read. That being said I am posting today what I have of Chapter 2. Happy Reading.

Good stuff. I like how you've structured the Court. So the Chancellor would be the equivalent to the White House Press Secretary?

One thing:

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We do a lot of mixing in the cities, and believe it or not the higher up in Fae rank the more likely hood there is of any Fae you meet being a hybrid of Fae types as opposed to purely one or another.

I believe it's "likelihood."

I fixed the likelihood thing.

As afar as the Chancellor goes, he has more power than the press secretary. More like the Prime Minister, but with out any will of his own. It was taken from him when he became the Chancellor. I may do a scene later on with Sir Tristan and Alex and talk about why some one would do it. I have visions of him being a former knight who did something against their will, but it was the right thing to do. He was promoted because it was the right thing, but his will was totally enslaved to theirs because he disobeyed a direct order.